Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Bewilderment

Referencing
 https://doi.org/10.1111/joms.12348
 * Consider moving non-journal articles and books to external links
 * 1) Betterhealth, 2020. Cognitive Behaviour Therapy. https://www.betterhealth.vic.gov.au/health/conditionsandtreatments/cognitive-behaviour-therapy
 * 2) Beyondblue. 2020. "Beyond Blue." https://www.beyondblue.org.au/
 * 3) Dimas, J., 2019. 15 Life Lessons From Rumi. Dwell in Magic. https://jessicadimas.com/life-lessons-from-rumi/
 * 4) Medical News Today. 2020. Fear: What Happens In The Brain And Body?. https://www.medicalnewstoday.com/articles/323492#Triggering-the-response
 * Requires APA7 format - missing journal publication, DOI
 * 1) Howe, F., 1998. Bewilderment. https://www.asu.edu/pipercwcenter/how2journal/archive/online_archive/v1_1_1999/fhbewild.html#:~:text=Bewilderment%20is%20an%20enchantment%20that,being%20completely%20lost%20by%20choice!
 * Requires APA7 format - missing DOI (see below for potential DOI number)
 * 1) Khanagha, S., Ramezan Zadeh, M., Mihalache, O., & Volberda, H. (2018). Embracing Bewilderment: Responding to technological disruption in heterogeneous market environments. Journal of Management Studies, 55(7), 1078–1121.
 * 1) Lewis, J. (2019). Reflections: Dialectic of Bewilderment. Eighteenth-Century Fiction, 31(3), 575–595. DOI: 10.3138/ecf.31.3.575 

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 * Comments on resubmitted book chapter

These revisions have been reviewed. Comments: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:04, 11 December 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall, there are minor improvements to the chapter.
 * 2) Several minor improvements of mixed value have been added, such as including more citations (however, the citations were generally to non-peer-reviewed sources). In other cases, suggestions for citations were removed rather than addressed.
 * 3) Addition of "Genealogical bewilderment" section. Some grammar errors and lack of sufficient citation.
 * 4) Direct quotes need page numbers. Preferably express concepts in own words. Direct quotes illustrate little to no understanding.
 * 5) Addition of "James-Lange theory of emotion" section. Not supported by research.
 * 6) Did you consult William James (1884) and Carl Lange (1887)? Probably not; don't use citations for sources that you haven't consulted. This is very general material and lacks sufficient application to bewilderment.
 * 7) Addition of "Cannon-Bard theory of emotion" section. Again, very general, with basic application to bewilderment. Not supported by research.
 * 8) The Conclusion has been strengthened.

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 * Comments on resubmitted multimedia presentation
 * 1) Audio recording is quite quiet
 * 2) An overview/focus questions is provided
 * 3) Well structured
 * 4) Consider slowing down and using greater intonation
 * 5) There is some audio fade out/in during slide transitions (should be possible to switch this off)
 * 6) Slides are visually clear; presenting less text on some slides could make the visuals easier to read
 * 7) Direct links to image sources are not provided.
 * 8) An example is used effectively