Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Cancer screening motivation

Age
It could be interesting to discuss if age has any impact on the participation rates of cancer screening. i.e. 20-30 year olds, below 40 and above 40--U3187486 (discuss • contribs) 11:54, 6 October 2020 (UTC)

Gender
It might be interesting to discuss that women are more likely to participate in bowel cancer screening programs than men. Jtneill - Talk - c 00:44, 20 August 2020 (UTC)

Fear
Perhaps also consider the role fear in preventing people from health screening, especially for bowel cancer. Jtneill - Talk - c 02:25, 20 August 2020 (UTC)

Spelling
Hey there ! Just letting you know that I fixed some spelling mistakes under the emotional factors paragraph! Feel free to keep these changes or remove them :) --U3190016 (discuss • contribs) 06:57, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Feedback
Hey this is looking really good! I would suggest to add a few more external links within the 'Cancer' section, especially for the other therapies that you mentioned. There also seems to be very little referencing within this section. The sentence 'Which lead to the second key component of early detection, cancer screening.' is a little difficult to follow. I would suggest writing something such as "In conjunction, the second key component of early detection is cancer screening." I would also try and add some images within the text to break it up for the reader. I love the running case study, this is really engaging and i like the way this is also going to be included within the conclusion. --U3187381 (discuss • contribs) 10:25, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

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Suggested edit
Hey, in your internal links changed, I added a link to the cancer heading, I hope that helps :) Dakka2005 (discuss • contribs) 23:11, 17 October 2020 (UTC)Dakka1998

Reference ideas
Hi User:U3191761, I noticed your all your currently listed references are from the Cancer Council website. I've found a few journal articles which may be of interest in your chapter regarding cancer screening motivations in several different studies. All of these should be locatable through the uni library website. Hope this helps

von Wagner, C., Hirst, Y., Waller, J., Ghanouni, A., McGregor, L., Kerrison, R., Verstraete, W., Vlaev, I., Sieverding, M., & Stoffel, S. (2019). The impact of descriptive norms on motivation to participate in cancer screening – Evidence from online experiments. Patient Education and Counseling, 102(9), 1621–1628. https://doi.org/10.1016/j.pec.2019.04.001

Roth, J., Carter-Harris, L., Brandzel, S., Buist, D., & Wernli, K. (2018). A qualitative study exploring patient motivations for screening for lung cancer. PloS One, 13(7), e0196758–. https://doi.org/10.1371/journal.pone.0196758

Conway-Phillips, R., & Janusek, L. (2014). Influence of sense of coherence, spirituality, social support and health perception on breast cancer screening motivation and behaviors in African American women. The ABNF Journal, 25(3), 72–79.

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