Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Compassion focused therapy

Suggestions for subheadings
So far your topic development looks really interesting! One thing I would do is possible change some of the subheadings to make them more straightforward and easier to understand. Another suggestion is to possibly add some sort of case study to allow the readers to better understand a topic in a real world example--U3187486 (discuss • contribs) 09:20, 26 August 2020 (UTC)

Suggestions for internal links in see also
Your chapter is looking really interesting, and easy to understand. One thing I would suggest is, if it is possible, trying to find a previous motivation and emotion book chapter that has even the slightest relation to your topic. --U3190522 (discuss • contribs) 10:28, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:30, 14 September 2020 (UTC)

Compassion capitalisation
Compassion is over-capitalised in the current draft. More info: https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/capitalization Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:03, 11 October 2020 (UTC)

Case study
Hi, I suggested that the case study can move at the end of the session, because if you put a case study at the beginning of theoretical framework, it is a little bit confusing, and try to give more details in the case study. --U3178984 (discuss • contribs) 03:17, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:06, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:32, 22 November 2020 (UTC)