Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Compersion

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Hi! This is a super interesting topic, I love the idea of polyamory and I think you've decided to research great ideas and concepts. I found a super cute video that you might be able to externally link that gives a really basic explanation of compersion. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=njKafVtQ1v8 U3189449 (discuss • contribs) 09:25, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

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Thank you! Super informative and helpful video, I have included it in my external links. U3202026 (discuss • contribs) 09:28, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:32, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Interim feedback
Great to see this resource developing. Some suggestions:
 * 1) The main feedback is to keep developing the sections which directly address the sub-title question and eep other sections minimal or even remove if they are not directly addressing the question.
 * 2) I copyedited the Overview - might give some ideas for tweaks elsewhere (e.g., use active rather than passive expression)
 * 3) Consider moving the first case study to the beginning of its section. Consider breaking the case study into two parts - e.g., perhaps initially a jealous scenario that later develops to become less jealous, with greater compersion
 * 4) The theoretical background about emotion is really only useful to the extent that it is subsequently applied to discussion about compersion - e.g,. is compersion natural or learned? is it biological or cognitive? etc.
 * 5) If there is a lack of info about developing compersion (likely), then provide critical comment about what is not known - what would be interested to know, that perhaps we know about other emotions, but don't yet know about compersion etc.
 * 6) APA style for citations - use "and" in main text and "&" in parentheses
 * 7) Refer to each figure at least once in the main text
 * 8) Quiz questions - consider splitting up so that each question appears at the end of the corresponding section
 * 9) Provide in-text wiki links to related book chapters e.g., for jealousy, polyamory etc. Those links are in see also, which is great, but where relevant also include as in-text links.
 * 10) References
 * 11) check and correct capitalisation
 * 12) dois should be active hyperlinks

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:21, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:56, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:31, 21 November 2020 (UTC)