Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Conscientiousness and motivation

Comments on Overview
I was reading through your overview which was very intriguing and straight to the point. Just something that I noticed was the first sentence; "This chapter aims to inform individuals about conscientiousness and motivation. This chapter will give an overview about conscientiousness". The only thing I would change is to compress these two sentences into one long sentence. I would word it something like this; "This chapter will give you an overview about conscientiousness while also aiming to inform you about how conscientiousness compensates motivation. Apart from that everything else looks good. --U3190523 (discuss • contribs) 10:03, 19 August 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:50, 20 September 2020 (UTC)

Quiz
Hi, this chapter looks great so far! However, I noted that your quiz has only two questions. I would suggest adding more questions and moving it to the end of your chapter, or adding another short quiz at the end, to continually keep people engaged. U3189449 (discuss • contribs) 07:09, 13 October 2020 (UTC)

Revision notes
Hi User:U3187486, some great content in your chapter. Be mindful about using consistent spacing after full stops (i.e. single or double space). APA 7 uses one space after a period. Also, consider whether “the” is needed in front of self-determination theory and goal setting theory in your theoretical frameworks section. Hope this helps. Here’s a link to review the changes I made :) --U3186080 (discuss • contribs) 15:15, 13 October 2020 (UTC)

Case study
Here is a link to an interesting case study that is relevant to your topic, it may be useful! https://pubmed.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/9141284/ U3176522 (discuss • contribs) 01:46, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:50, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:53, 22 November 2020 (UTC)