Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Hope therapy

Hope therapy in cancer patients
Would be really interesting to see a case study on hope therpy in cancer patients and how it effects their rehabilitation and mental health during the treatment process. --Taylor Mamukic (discuss • contribs) 04:55, 27 August 2020 (UTC)

Hope Therapy and Mental Illness
It would be interesting to look at the effects of Hope Therapy on mental illnesses such as Depression, anxiety and stress. It would also be interesting to compare Hope Therapy to other Positive Psychology Constructs --U3202324 (discuss • contribs) 05:03, 27 August 2020 (UTC)

Comment
Hi, excellent chapter, I can see you're almost done. I just have a few editing suggestions which may help:
 * You have used several great figures in your chapter, however these haven't been referenced in your text. I believe all figures which we use must be mentioned in the main body of the text, such as: See figure 1 for a visual representation of a historical story about hope.
 * Your section 'What is Hope Therapy' starts with a quote from Snyder et al. A direct quote should also include a page number in the form: (Snyder et al., 2018, p. XX).
 * In some places you have Hope Theory capitalised and in some places you don't. This should be consistent. There is a discussion on the UC Forum relating to this: https://uclearn.canberra.edu.au/courses/7742/discussion_topics/129717. I'd suggest that hope theory probably doesn't need to be capitalised.
 * Similarly for children's hope scale this has been written with capitalisation and without.
 * You also seem to be missing a reference for the children's hope scale. How do you know what circumstances it has been tested under?
 * Take care with apostrophe use. I've corrected this for you in a couple of places. But "how individuals approach" is plural - it doesn't need an apostrophe. "an individual's lifestyl" does need an apostrophe, and when you're talking about something that belongs to more than one person i.e. "individuals' lifestyles" the apostrophe goes after the s.
 * Is the box under Medial Orbitofrontal Cortex (mOFC) a direct quote? If so it needs quotation marks and a page reference
 * Don't forget that journal titles need to be italicised in your referencing. You can do this by adding two single quotation marks (or apostrophes) around what you want italiscised. For example: Chan, K., Wong, F., & Lee, P. (2019). A Brief Hope Intervention to Increase Hope Level and Improve Well-Being in Rehabilitating Cancer Patients: A Feasibility Test. SAGE Open Nursing, 5, 237796081984438. https://doi.org/10.1177/2377960819844381 U3025324 (discuss • contribs) 10:23, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Heading casing
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Categories
Hi, you did a great job. Try to add categories on your page.--U3178984 (discuss • contribs) 03:52, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

TED-talk video
Hey! Your chapter looks great, although I bet it is almost finished I stumbled across this video that I thought may interest you. Hope you enjoy and that it helps contribute to your book chapter. https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hYchBHuwdI0. --taramaland (discuss contribs) 10:00, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

Revision notes
Hi User:Jackson McNee I fixed some formatting with your first two subheadings which was them to display in the contents as bold, added some missing full stops throughout text, and fixed some grammar such as a few apostrophes.

Here's a link to review the changes I made. Hope this helps :)

--U3186080 (discuss • contribs) 18:01, 17 October 2020 (UTC)

Social Contribution
hey there, I was doing some last minute research and came across this article, although it is probably a bit late, i thought it might be of some interest for you :)https://www.researchgate.net/publication/308994930_Hope_Therapy_in_Depression_A_Case_Report --U3175502 (discuss • contribs) 07:37, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:52, 12 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:49, 23 November 2020 (UTC)