Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Nutrition and anxiety

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Hey, your article is already looking incredible. I'm enrolled in a couple of nutrition classes and am interested in the subject, so I can't wait for the finished product. --U3160493 (discuss • contribs) 08:19, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:50, 12 September 2020 (UTC)

Length and heading format
Hello, this looks to be a fascinating topic and you've put a lot of work into it. My suggestion would be to wind back on theheadings and try to synthesise some of the topics as one bigger one. I also see that some headings have wevery word capitalised "Like They Do In This Sentence" when it should "Look something like this". I made the same mistake in my topic development. --U3114726 (discuss • contribs) 05:58, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Further feedback on heading format
Hi there! I am doing the omega-3 fatty acids and mood book chapter, so our chapters related quite a lot. You've done a really great job at covering many areas of your topic. In terms of your headings, ensure that only the first word of your heading is capitalised. For example, instead of "Making The Sentence Look Like This", it needs to "Look like this". Hope this helps you out! Good luck --U3190522 (discuss • contribs) 07:50, 18 October 2020 (UTC)U3190522

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:26, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:24, 13 November 2020 (UTC)

Book chapter and multimedia feedback responses from author
Thank you for your feedback, I have taken it on board. I'm glad to hear that the book chapter internal hyperlinking was well executed and the presentation communication and production was well done. With regards to the word count of the chapter and the time limit of the presentation both being over, I was aware of this, but under the impression that the marking guidelines followed the +/- 10% rule that has been given in all of my other assessments throughout my degree. Evidently this is not the case and apologies for not double checking. Also, for the presentation, a written description on Youtube was provided. Following your advice, I have made my presentation public on Youtube. I'm looking forward to receiving my final feedback and grade.