Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Oxytocin and mother-infant bonding

Quiz
Hi, you can put the "All of the Above." as the last answer to question 1. And also check question 2 --U3178984 (discuss • contribs) 10:17, 12 October 2020 (UTC)

Potential for more in-depth information
I would like to see some information on how the bond between mother and infant is measured. Also, think you could delve further into oxytocin and its effect on emotions, and these demonstrated within the mother-infant example. U3202026 (discuss • contribs) 09:10, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

Reply
Thank you, have already found a test they use to measure mother-infant bond. Will make sure to include it in chapter. U3189449 (discuss • contribs) 09:28, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:26, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Interim feedback
Some suggestions from a quick review of the draft:
 * 1) Overall, this is looking good and coming along well. The following are relatively minor comments.
 * 2) FYI, I've made some minor edits
 * 3) Good to see the chapter considering what happens when the mother doesn't bond well with the infant - and why, particularly the role of oxytocin in these situations?
 * 4) Better than "in the above subsection ‘Skin to skin contact’", provide a link e.g., in the skin to skin contact section.
 * 5) Remember to refer to all figures at least once in the text
 * 6) Use 3rd person perspective (e.g,. search for instances of "you" and rewrite).
 * 7) APA style:
 * 8) Where 'apostrophes' are used for emphasis, these should be "double quote marks".
 * 9) Citations: (Bell, et. al., 2014) should be (Bell, et al., 2014)
 * 10) References - APA style 7 (see the UCLearn Discussions for more inf:
 * 11) Check and correct capitalisation
 * 12) Use italicisation
 * 13) Remove "Retrieved from"
 * 14) Provide the full doi website address as an active hyperlink

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:22, 15 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:38, 22 November 2020 (UTC)