Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Performance feedback

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:11, 14 September 2020 (UTC)

APA style for citations
This is a minor suggestion about APA style for citations. Add a space before using a citation in brackets. For example, "... learned(Hattie & Timperley, 2007)" should be "... learned (Hattie & Timperley, 2007)". Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 14:51, 9 October 2020 (UTC)

Draft feedback
I've had a quick skim through this impressive-looking chapter. A few tips/suggestions:
 * Consider linking the first mentions of key concepts to relevant Wikipedia pages or related book chapter topics. Wiki links were covered in Tutorial 2.
 * Consider using Australian/British spelling - e.g., behaviour (Australian/British) vs. behavior (US); also analyse vs. analyze.
 * There are some grammar and spelling errors. Consider inviting peers to help e.g., by posting the chapter on the UCLearn discussion forum. This will help to improve the chapter and give an opportunity for others to make social contributions.
 * The hyperlinks in the reference list should be active (i.e., clickable)

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:20, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Social Contributions
Hi, well done on your book chapter, there is a lot of very interesting relevant information regarding your topic. You have repeated "Feedback is one of the most powerful influences" twice right after each other, may I suggest that you change one of the sentences so they aren't repeated. May I also suggest that you change some sentences to bold italics or add something special to your page like a table or some sub headings to make it look more interesting and make viewers "want to read" your book chapter. --U3190523 (discuss • contribs) 07:01, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:59, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:23, 20 November 2020 (UTC)