Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Sympathy

Figure 4 and overview
This is looking very good, I would suggest two small improvements. From a visual point of view moving figure 4 up a little would fill in the blank gap. With your overview i suggest maybe adding your quote into a 'pretty box' and to try and combine the two sets of questions you currently have. --U3187381 (discuss • contribs) 11:25, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:04, 21 September 2020 (UTC)

Social contribution
Hi, your chapter looks great and I can see that its almost finished, so I just have a couple of editing suggestions: 1. I think that having both the focus questions and the questions in the outline is a bit confusing, and some of them are similar, so maybe you could combine them? eg What is sympathy and what does it look like?, How and why do we experience sympathy? 2. You have a lot of relevant figures, but they aren't mentioned in the text. According to the marking criteria they should be referred to at least once. 3. Don't forget to italicise journal names and volume numbers in the references. I hope this helps U3170940 (discuss • contribs) 00:08, 16 October 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 20:48, 16 November 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:49, 22 November 2020 (UTC)