Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/TV binge-watching motivation

Comments
I think someone has said this already but, consider breaking up your longer sections with subheadings. Good work! --SLDux (discuss • contribs) 15:30, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

Binge-watching as a form of procrastination
Hi! Really interesting topic that you have here and I look forward to seeing what you come up with! :) May I also suggest looking into binge-watching as a form of procrastination and how that relates to instant vs. delayed gratification? I hope this helps! :) Here's an interesting essay that I hope give you some ideas: http://essay.utwente.nl/81723/1/Ciroth_BA_Faculty%20of%20Behavioural%2C%20Management%20%26%20Social%20Sciences.pdf U3169316 (discuss • contribs) 02:49, 9 September 2020 (UTC)

Relevance of Binge-Watching Motivation
I suggest using the COVID-19 pandemic research on the increase in paid entertainment services and using that data and those statistics to help describe and highlight the importance of your book chapter and the impacts of TV Binge watching on a persons health/relationships. Amin Nazzal (discuss • contribs) 10:19, 27 August 2020 (UTC) Amin Nazzal (discuss • contribs) 14:19, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

Descriptions of the Terms Used
Within your descriptions of the terms used section i would recommend using a table to present this information. I think this will assist the reader if they were to go back and double check a meaning. This link can be used to assist in the creation of tables https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Assessment/Chapter/Tables. --U3187381 (discuss • contribs) 03:02, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:19, 16 September 2020 (UTC)

Symptoms questionnaire
I have linked an interesting study that assess bing watching behaviour and that created a questionnaire to show symptoms of binge watching https://doi.org/10.1016/j.chb.2018.08.022 --Jackson McNee (discuss • contribs) 03:22, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

This should not be a research proposal
The book chapter exercise is not a research proposal. I strongly recommend a close reading of the author guidelines and the lecture and tutorial content about this assessment task. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:40, 10 October 2020 (UTC)

Formatting
Hi, This is a really interesting topic you have selected. I can see that you've put a lot of time and effort into researching this. However, can I suggest that you break down the really long paragraphs and use some sub-headings. It would make it easier to read and give your book chapter a better overall look. Also, some images would be helpful for the aesthetics and maybe think about some graphs or diagrams so that it can be more engaging.

Great work.

--U3114726 (discuss • contribs) 05:48, 14 October 2020 (UTC)

Hi, I suggest you include some internal wikilinks throughout your text on key concepts. This can be done by highlighting a word and hitting the link button. I would also suggest implementing some engaging case studies or quizzes throughout your chapter, just to break up the reading a little bit and possibly add some colour to your page. If you're not too savvy with using wikiversity I found a little trick was copying and pasting case study or quiz boxes from previous chapters (e.g Motivation and Emotion/Book/2019) into my own chapter and changing the content. Hope this helps, good luck with the rest of your chapter. --Shayley Woodgate (discuss • contribs) 03:13, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

A few idea's
Hi, I was thinking that you could include a section on intentional and unintentional binges. https://psycnet.apa.org/doiLanding?doi=10.1037%2Fppm0000167 here is an article about its addictive potential. Also here is an article on optimising binge-watching behaviour https://dl.acm.org/doi/pdf/10.1145/2932206.2932216?casa_token=QrO3RRAqK3kAAAAA%3AB8ET4o4Hm1DH-D1G_NC3KjGopChk0cX1LVXkvhEGRaz3coMsYABv3FARD92l2s9KuY3qNbbVOPk Good luck! --U3201178 (discuss • contribs) 03:45, 15 October 2020 (UTC)

Social Contribution
Hi, well done on your book chapter, there is so much relevant information! it looks like a lot of time and effort went into this. A couple things I may comment on is the "review of current literature" you really don't need this in your book chapter as book chapters don't usually have this. You could add this into a fancy box or pretty box to separate it from the rest of the relevant information. Another thing I might say is to add more information into the "Descriptions of the terms used" headings. What's the point in having subheadings when there is only one sentence? if you were to add a more information into these your book chapter will really benefit from it. --U3190523 (discuss • contribs) 21:22, 18 October 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:20, 17 November 2020 (UTC)

These revisions have been reviewed. Comments:
 * Comments on resubmitted book chapter

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:49, 10 December 2020 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall, this is a vastly improved and now complete chapter.
 * 2) The phenomenon of TV binge watching is now better described.
 * 3) Focus questions are now more relevant to the topic.
 * 4) More relevant research is now incorporated.
 * 5) More relevant theory is now included.
 * 6) Irrelevant content has been removed.
 * 7) Figures 1 and 3 were falsely claimed as the author's own work - they have been recommended for deletion.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:17, 19 November 2020 (UTC)

Social Contribuiton
Hi there, Well done on completing your book chapter, It seems like you have put great effort into finding a range of information, in saying this I feel this information could be improved by add some studies that provide motivational theory and reasons behind your content. Below is an example of a peer reviewed article I feel might be useful 'An exploration of the motivations for binge-watching and the role of individual differences' - Journal of Computers in Human Behaviour- Science direct

I also feel it would be helpful to add an interactive activity to help engage readers, for example a quiz. --U3187388 (discuss • contribs) 10:03, 6 December 2020 (UTC)