Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2020/Voyeurism motivation

Initial feedback
Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:31, 24 August 2020 (UTC)
 * Top-level heading structure looks good/makes sense
 * I've moved the image into a section. No need for citation. As per Tutorial 3, the image can be clicked to show all the relevant meta-data, license, author etc.
 * Consider using bullet-points (~3 per section) to communicate a plan for the chapter


 * A couple of other suggestions:
 * Looks like this is shaping up really well.
 * Include at least one bullet-point to introduce each section.
 * Consider possibly including a case study.
 * Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:22, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

Feedback
Interesting topic! Reading through, it could be worthwhile to include the difference between 'normal' voyeurism (i.e. watching reality shows) and pathological voyeurism, and how it's assessed. --U3037228 (discuss • contribs) 08:07, 30 August 2020 (UTC)

Feedback
Maybe consider watching the new Documentary Voyeur on netflix, wich gives a real example of someone who is and was a voyeur https://www.radiotimes.com/news/2017-11-29/netflixs-intensely-creepy-documentary-voyeur-will-scare-you-away-from-motels-forever/ --Oscar3176498 (discuss • contribs) 22:58, 30 September 2020 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:17, 14 September 2020 (UTC)

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