Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Cognitive dissonance and motivation

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:45, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

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Hi there! I love how you formatted this chapter. As this chapter is due tomorrow, I did some moderate copyediting to correct some wording to make the sentences flow better and made sure all your references were apa 7 formatted (I corrected about 7-9 references for captalisation and italicisation). This chapter is very thouroughly researched and very well-written and concise. Due to the very close due date I didn't leave any suggestions as I didn't want things to still be included by the 9 AM deadline. Anyways, Congrats and good luck on your book chapter! U3203008 (discuss • contribs)

Hey this is a really interesting topic, however I feel like your chapter could do great with a little about dissonance with smoking, as an ex-smoker myself, I know how hard it is to quit and the crazy things we justify to not acknowledge the problem I had here is the article, hope it helps https://psycnet.apa.org/record/1968-13611-001 --U3202984 (discuss • contribs) 11:30, 15 October 2021 (UTC)

Hey. Love the little case study, I really think it is a nice touch. Please consider using 'key learnings' box in your overview. Think about what someone will know once they have read this. You never know how useful it will be to someone and in the end, it will help you write your conclusion! My chapter has a good template you can use if you go into 'source editing' and copy the code (copy, don't cut) https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2021/Indigenous_Australian_well-being

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:39, 5 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:49, 19 November 2021 (UTC)