Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Compassion

Heading casing
-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:08, 17 September 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:46, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 19:24, 18 November 2021 (UTC)

Book chapter resubmission feedback
These changes were reviewed. Comments:
 * 1) The chapter has received a major overhaul, with a lot of the content about self-compassion removed and a lot of new content about compassion added. As a result, the chapter is now better aligned with the original topic, and thus much improved. However, there is still too much content about self-compassion (e.g., the section of the pros of compassion is actually about self-compassion).
 * 2) The chapter is now over the maximum count. Some of the content should be summarised (e.g., the Neurophysiological section).
 * 3) added some basic copyediting.
 * 4) A grammatical error was added to the subtitle. I've corrected it.
 * 5) Heading casing has not been corrected.
 * 6) Introductory sections have not been added before branching into sub-headings.
 * 7) Some of the paragraphs are overly long. Aim for three to five sentences.
 * 8) The Overview has been significantly improved. However, some of the wording is problematic (e.g., the last sentence doesn't make sense).
 * 9) Theory is now moderately well covered.
 * 10) Research is now moderately well covered.
 * 11) The Conclusion provides a basic summary.
 * 12) The quality of written expression is basic.
 * 13) The use of learning features is basic. I liked to use of the self-compassion exercises.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:38, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Multimedia resubmission feedback

 * 1) A very basic Overview is provided.
 * 2) This is a basic presentation.
 * 3) The presentation now focuses on compassion instead of self-compassion, so is much better aligned with the topic.
 * 4) A general overview of compassion is provided using narrated audio with a basic set of text and image-based slides.
 * 5) No Conclusion with take-home messages is provided.
 * 6) The source of the images is not acknowledged.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:45, 6 December 2021 (UTC)