Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Creative arts and trauma

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Multimedia resubmission feedback
Notable points about the multimedia presentation resubmission: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:45, 26 November 2021 (UTC)
 * Overall
 * This is a basic but sufficient presentation.
 * The presentation is over the maximum time limit - content beyond 3 mins is ignored for marking purposes.
 * Overview
 * The opening slide presents and narrates the title and sub-title in a basic way. No further context provided.
 * Check and correct grammar (e.g., question mark missing from title of slide shown at 00:39 mins).
 * Content
 * Trauma is defined.
 * Creative arts therapy is defined.
 * A basic explanation of theory is provided. No specific emotional theories are mentioned or cited.
 * Two research studies about creative art therapy interventions are described.
 * Effect sizes would be more useful in addition to p values - i.e., how much change was there?
 * Conclusion
 * Does not fit within the time limit, so ignored for marking purposes.
 * Audio
 * The narrated audio is clear and well-paced with reasonable intonation.
 * Recording quality is OK. There is some white noise.
 * Video
 * The visual presentation makes good use of text and images.
 * The text size is easy to read.
 * The amount of text per slide could be reduced to make it easier to read and listen at the same time.
 * The visual content is relevant to the topic.
 * Hide the presentation icon (in the middle of the screen).
 * Meta-data
 * The presentation uses the correct title and partially correct sub-title.
 * No description of the presentation is provided.
 * A link to the book chapter is provided.
 * No link from the book chapter to the updated presentation is provided. I've made this change.
 * Licensing
 * Copyright restricted images have been used without permission, violating the rights of the copyright owner. For example, the image shown at 00:30 mins clearly indicates the copyright status in the bottom right corner of the image. This presentation should be removed.
 * No copyright license for the presentation is indicated.

Book chapter resubmission feedback

 * 1) These changes were reviewed. These copyedits were added.
 * 2) Overall, minor improvements have been made.
 * 3) The chapter is well under the maximum word count.
 * 4) The correct title was added.
 * 5) There are minor improvements to theory.
 * 6) There are minor improvements to research.
 * 7) A link the multimedia presentation was added.
 * 8) The Overview was removed.
 * 9) Direct quotes are overused - it is better to express concepts in your own words.
 * 10) Quiz questions are added. The wording is not grammatically correct.
 * 11) Some images have been added. APA style captions are not used. The images are not cited in the text.
 * 12) Some paragraphs are overly long. Aim for 3 to 5 sentences.
 * 13) Citations do not use correct APA style (e.g., use et al. when there are three or more authors).
 * 14) References are still not in consistent and correct APA style (e.g., APA style no longer uses "Retrieved from (date)").

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:03, 6 December 2021 (UTC)