Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Cultural influences on shame, guilt, and pride

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Hi! This seems like this will develop into an interesting chapter. However, some further proofreading is required as there are several grammatical errors throughout - it may be best to write your drafts in a word document and then copy it over onto Wikiversity as the built-in text editor doesn't have a spellchecker. I've marked a few of these errors in your chapter.

I've noticed you have a sentence in the first paragraph of 'what is culture' which is "Same goes for human social life". This is probably best combined into the previous sentence, as this feels like a fragmented sentence.

Best of luck! --U3190229 (discuss • contribs) 07:11, 28 August 2020 (UTC)

Tidy title
Hi, I just adjusted the title to make it just a bit cleaner and less crowded, but also adjust one grammatical mistake in the title. --Takudzwa14 (discuss • contribs) 05:15, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

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