Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Factitious disorder imposed on another motivation

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My book chapter is on what motivates one to impose factitious disorder upon another. Clawson2 (discuss • contribs) 07:46, 29 August 2021 (UTC)

Hi! An I interesting subject! During my reading, I noticed an issue with spacing in the case study that I corrected. Look forward to reading your chapter once completed!--U3167879 (discuss • contribs) 12:48, 19 September 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:36, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

General feedback for this chapter
Hey. I saw this chapter in the discussion forum open for help, so I left some feedback for you. 1. I would consider re-jigging the order of your headings. I personally would move history above motivation 2. On that, I would not spend too much time on the history because this disorder is particularly 'odd' so you can really play with the content and really engage the reader. 3. Great case study, although very over popularised. Consider using another to supplement or at least being more critical. Try linking the case to the theory which you speak about! The medical literature dates these disorders and has multiple accounts back to Plato and Aristotle so there is no reason not to use them! This one is just Hollywood-ised

--> Have a look at this chapter for a good example of multiple cases: https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2021/Indigenous_Australian_well-being

4. Love the way you popped a picture into the textbox; haven't seen that before and it took me a few mins to figure out how to do it! 5. Consider rewording 'warning signs' to 'predictors' or something like that; more professional 6. Overall great start. I think you have a fab chapter on the way!

Hi, just providing some quick feedback on a few things I noticed: - once you have introduced a non-abbreviated word and choose to abbreviate it later on, ensure it is first put in brackets, eg Factitious disorder imposed on another (FDIA)… - great use of case study - consider adding a source at the bottom of the textbox (for reference reasons) - continue to add to the chapter and to finish it off - great work! --J.Payten (discuss • contribs) 03:24, 11 October 2021 (UTC)

Hi! I really love your inclusion of the media aspects of factitious disorder. The movie Run (2020) also portrays this kind of relationship and briefly touches on the recovering process at the end if that is something that would interest you/you think would be applicable to your section. Another aspect to your media section I think would benefit your chapter is the impact of social media on factitious disorder. https://www.lifescienceglobal.com/pms/index.php/ijcs/article/view/7659/3919 is a good broad-approach to how social media can easily be manipulated, and I think that if you search for a case study based on social media it would bring it back nicely to the case study at the start, while also demonstrating the impact social media has on the disorder.

https://www.ncbi.nlm.nih.gov/pmc/articles/PMC2912683/ has a similar theme but focuses more on how seeing the attention garnered by the media influences factitious disorder.

I really enjoy what you have written so far, and I found your 'Working notes: *hysterical screaming*' both really, really funny but also relateable. This is a tough assignment, but you're doing well and I can't wait to see the finished product!!! --U3187741 (discuss • contribs) 00:20, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

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