Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Fantasy and sexual motivation

Thoughts on layout, image ideas, and maybe a useful reference
This is an interesting topic for sure, so good luck with the writing! As a thought, perhaps the 'sexual fantasy' section might fit better as the first thing discussed in the chapter? That way you might not have to double up on the explanations for 'sexual motivation' and the varying theories. As for pictures, maybe try something from the 'sexual fantasy' page on Wikipedia? A fair few of the ones on that page re public domain. Finally, I don't know if this source would help (https://journals.sagepub.com/doi/abs/10.1177/0146167218789611) but it might be useful if you are looking for recent studies - it should be possible to get a full copy through the UC library access. --U3020459 (discuss • contribs) 14:24, 28 August 2021 (UTC)

Comments
From U3187741: Hi! I noticed that you don't have this book chapter linked on your chapter. It may be beneficial as it is a similar topic and pleasure can be derived from sexual fantasies!

Editing comments
Hey! Really great chapter! Just a few editing notes, your intext references are bolded (not sure if this is because you’re still working on the chapter) and don’t need to be, also there is overuse of italics, italics should only be used when referring to a specific theory, however in APA and for this textbook are not required. The italics often lead to confusion as to the actual importance of the concept. Might also be worth externally linking some of the terms, wiki has multiple different pages on it, such as this one on sexual fantasy https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sexual_fantasy. Also might be useful to use more external links, see this article on how the science of sexual desire can improve your sex life https://goop.com/wellness/sexual-health/how-the-science-of-sexual-desire-can-improve-your-sex-life/. Or others like it! --U3187874 (discuss • contribs) 02:32, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:29, 7 September 2021 (UTC)

Suggestion
Hi! You topic is really interesting and seems like you have a lot of information about it already! I have just added an internal wiki link to get you started as I saw you had none! Hope this helps you get started! --U3204694 (discuss • contribs) 11:14, 30 September 2021 (UTC)

Suggestion
Hey, i just added two other pages under see also, i think they would apply to your chapter. --Takudzwa14 (discuss • contribs) 07:21, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

imbedded links
Hey! I added embedded links and did some spelling corrections. Good luck! [|MargaretMinikin] 17/10/2021 6:23 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:15, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:00, 15 November 2021 (UTC)