Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Fulfilling potential

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:37, 11 September 2021 (UTC)

Student comments
Hey. How are you? It looks like you are in the preliminary stages here, so I won't pick at this too much but consider: a) Using far more in-text links to alternative websites or wiki b) Consider how you are using your citations: are they recent/relevant and are there enough? For this task, you might need upwards of 20 citations to support your claims c) Not much use of colour. Colour is used to engage the reader. You will lose marks if you don't use colour. Check out my chapter for an example. d) I do really like the use of the two pictures, at first I wondered why you have used it twice, but upon further reading, it seems relevant. e) Add a conclusion! Also make sure the overview is short and sharp with a box for 'key learnings' Good luck

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:51, 14 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:12, 16 November 2021 (UTC)