Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Indigenous Australian well-being

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Great topic! For interest, I thought this might be a good 'See Also' link. It it for the Back to Country project for Indigenous Australians, I've personally have connections with them and they are doing some fabulous work in particular with young indigenous males https://www.cultureislife.org/project/back-to-country-uncle-max-harrison/ --U3193728 (discuss • contribs) 02:03, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Psychology and Indigenous people
New article may be of interest: https://www.annualreviews.org/doi/abs/10.1146/annurev-psych-012921-045304 -- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:57, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Little bit late but this is a clip about closing the gap could be useful for an external link, it mentions the schemas that people think aboriginal people are related to alcohol and drugs. https://youtu.be/QzUp41sel-I --U3202710 (discuss • contribs) 01:55, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

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Wow, you have done so much for your chapter. I a few comments. First, regarding placement of modules and key learning. I acknowledge this is a work in progress but I found module one a little hard to read as it wrapped fro left to right under the key takeaways. Second, I found your image "Wellmob" very interesting and engaging. I have not see it before. Third, your first quiz. The second question is a little tricky because it does not note that you can select more than one. -- (u3167879 - |Talk - c 04:14, 18 August 2021 (UTC)

Awesome job Laura, very engaging and great balance between content, activities, and figures. A few things I would like to suggest: - consider adding sources to your case studies (just for plagiarism reasons) - consider exploring the recent events of COVID19 in Wilcannia, which has been heavily impacted - I also noticed for your independent tasks that it seems the resources for 1 & 2 are mixed around Great job! --J.Payten (discuss • contribs) 00:57, 3 October 2021 (UTC)

Hi Laura. I would suggest confirming the reference requirements because I note you have used two styles: APA and end note(?). One would provide consistency. I also note that you have only referred to your figure 4 image. One of the comments I had after the book topic was : Cite each figure at least once in the main text. To that end I have inserted figure 1 and 2 to assist, but I would suggest confirming requirements to ensure you do not lose easy marks. Hope this helps. --U3167879 (discuss • contribs) 10:50, 3 October 2021 (UTC)

Hi! Iv’e found a past book chapter which discusses Indigenous Australian transgenerational trauma and psychological well-being (2019). Might be useful to add to your ‘see also’ section :) - --TaraU3187760 (discuss • contribs) 05:33, 16 October 2021 (UTC) https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2019/Indigenous_Australian_transgenerational_trauma_and_psychological_well-being

Hello! Iv’e found a past book chapter which discusses Indigenous Australian transgenerational trauma (2020). Might also be useful to add to your ‘see also’ section :) --U3202315 (discuss • contribs) 18:52, 17 October 2021 (UTC) https://en.m.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2020/Transgenerational_trauma

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Indigenous Mental Health and Suicide Prevention Clearinghouse
This could be a useful resource for this chapter: Indigenous Mental Health and Suicide Prevention Clearinghouse (Australian Institute of Health and Welfare). -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:40, 28 September 2021 (UTC)

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Hi there!

Your book chapter looks great! Congrats on the work you have put into it so far! I do have a couple of suggestions which I hope are helpful. Firstly, referencing using footnotes (such as the wiki format), you need to put the footnote number after punctuation. So for example, your footnote numbers would look something like this.³ This is the link to the guide: https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia:Citing_sources#Footnotes. Secondly, I really liked your initial case study, but you might also like to link it to the case of Mabo v Queensland (No 2) which overturned the doctrine of terra nullius and recognised native title. It seems like it would be pertinent to your chapter. This is a summary because the full judgment is quite long: https://aiatsis.gov.au/sites/default/files/research_pub/overturning-the-doctrine-of-terra-nullius_0_3.pdf. Thirdly, you might like to add a couple more references into the chapter, particularly after definitions. For instance, "one might condense wellbeing into" or "holistic wellbeing is defined as" could be followed by a source to both acknowledge where you got the defintion and to add weight to the statement. You might also want to use definitions which are specific for psychology such as the APA dictionary or a theory article (maybe this one might be good for wellbeing https://www.internationaljournalofwellbeing.org/index.php/ijow/article/view/89 ) rather than the Oxford english dictionary.

Hope these suggestions help. All the best with the rest of the semester!!

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