Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Menopause and emotion

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Hi, Your book chapter topic is interesting, I would very much like to read it when it is completed, I especially liked the points that were made about how to alleviate symptoms of menopause by embracing a positive attitude. Good luck with it. --U3151962 (discuss • contribs) 07:45, 12 October 2019 (UTC)

Hello I see you still have some development needed to be added to the throes, here is a link for The James-Lange Theory of Emotions that could be useful --U3202710 (discuss • contribs) 22:16, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

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Sounds so interesting!! I just noticed some of your journal articles for reference list were not italised so just a heads up! to do this, go into edit source and surround what you want italised with "  ". Goodluck! --U3187178 (discuss • contribs) 06:18, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

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It seems like you're off to a great start!! You've set up a really good foundation. It's nice to see you've got a lot of your headings and dot points in there, that'll make writing more of the page a smoother and faster experience. I'm sure this is a topic that is quite relatable to a lot of people, I hope that there are people going through menopause who are able to read your finished article, and understand a little bit more what they're going through. My own mother has gone through hers, and I know she struggled a lot, so maybe this article will be able to help a lot of people :) Keep up the good work! --Demimimimi (discuss • contribs) 12:02, 20 October 2019 (UTC)

Hello I really enjoyed reading your chapter you have included lot's of interesting content. The only thing I would suggest is to potentially simplify how your headings appear in your contents page as it will make it easier for the reader to navigate to certain sections of your chapter and also help the structure of your chapter. Other than that I think you have done a great job, well done! U3202315 (discuss• contribs) 18:42, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

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