Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Safety as a psychological need

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:11, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:26, 24 November 2021 (UTC)

Suggestions
Hello,

I read your book chapter and found the topic to be quite interesting, however, I have a couple suggestions in case you wanted to improve it. Your references should include a doi or link to the website you obtained them, you should also italicise and capitalise the name of the journals (for example, "American Psychologist"), you should also have a look at what words are capitalised in your titles as they should generally have only the first word capitalised for most of them. Another thing which I did that you could elaborate on is adding external links in case the reader would like to do some extra reading.

Overall was a good read.

( = Lewis.Kusk) Lewis.Kusk (discuss • contribs) 02:11, 16 October 2022 (UTC)