Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Self-regulation

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:38, 4 September 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:36, 13 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:47, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Book chapter resubmission

 * 1) These changes were reviewed.
 * 2) The chapter is now over the word count, so not all of the added content has been considered for marking purposes.
 * 3) Overview - some expansion and improvement.
 * 4) Theory
 * 5) Substantial additional SR theoretical content is added.
 * 6) Overall, too much is added because the chapter is now over the maximum word count. Be more focused and selective.
 * 7) I think you might mean "learning self-regulation" rather than "learned self-regulation"?
 * 8) Research
 * 9) The review of relevant research has been significantly improved.
 * 10) Overview
 * 11) This section has been substantially increased, but is too long and is largely ignored for marking purposes due to the chapter being over the maximum word count.
 * 12) Written expression
 * 13) Style
 * 14) Where grammar was fixed, not all of the  tags were removed.
 * 15) There are many new grammatical errors (e.g., see  tags).
 * 16) Direct quotes should be embedded into sentences rather than dumped.
 * 17) Direct quotes should use APA style.
 * 18) Direct quotes are overused. It is better to express ideas using your own words. Direct quotes have been largely ignored for marking purposes.
 * 19) Avoid one sentence paragraphs (aim for 3 to 5 sentences).
 * 20) Use Australian spelling (e.g., recognize -> recognise).
 * 21) Remove unnecessary capitalisation (e.g., "It is regulated through cognition, and Motivation").
 * 22) Check and correct use of that vs. who.
 * 23) The References have been expanded.
 * 24) Learning features
 * 25) Several images have been added. APA style captions are not provided. Figures are not referred to in the text.
 * 26) See also has been substantially expanded.
 * 27) External links have been expanded.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:48, 6 December 2021 (UTC)

Multimedia presentation resubmission feedback

 * 1) Overall, this is a basic, but sufficient presentation.
 * 2) A basic Overview is provided. No focus questions are presented.
 * 3) Overall, too much detailed content is presented. Consider slowing down and summarising.
 * 4) Some slides contain too much text to easily read while listening.
 * 5) The audio is quite fast. Consider leaving longer pauses between sentences.
 * 6) There is some audio distortion - the microphone might be too close?
 * 7) Consider using greater intonation to increase interest to listener.
 * 8) The presentation has a correct title and sub-title.
 * 9) A brief description is provided.
 * 10) A link to the book chapter is provided.
 * 11) A copyright license is provided, but not in the meta-data field for licensing.
 * 12) There is no acknowledgement of image sources - copyright may have been violated.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:02, 6 December 2021 (UTC)