Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Serenity

Heading casing
{| style="float: center; background:transparent;" Self-determination theory rather than Self-Determination Theory
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Editing recommendation
Hi! Really interesting topic! I like your writing style. Just a few editing notes, your description for figure one in the text says it displays the process of meditation, however it is more a visual representation of meditation. I would suggest rewording this to be “displays a visual representation of the peace awarded to the body through meditation, a way of fostering serenity”, and also changing the textbox below the image to give a better description to the relevance in the text. Aside from that it looks good! I like the use of quizzes after every section, allows for good ineraction! --U3187874 (discuss • contribs) 06:09, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

Hey looking good, you might want to try do a bit of restructuring make it a bit more flow on through the questions that are around the topic, I suggest having a clear spot for the consequences of I guess not having serenity? - a heading for the consequences then blah, blah, blah under. --U3202710 (discuss • contribs) 08:37, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

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Referencing style
Hi, I really like what you have in so far, and I am looking forward to see how you expand your points. Please remember to look at your reference list to check that it complies to a style. I find APA, as i've used it quite a bit now, easier to conform to. Good luck

Feature boxes
Hello, I noticed there was some inconsistency in the feature boxes, I bolded the questions in your quiz boxes and fixed up a grammatical error in one of the quiz questions to fix this issue --Brianna Meddemmen (discuss • contribs) 13:11, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:55, 7 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:42, 18 November 2021 (UTC)