Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Sustainable leadership

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:30, 6 September 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:16, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:29, 15 November 2021 (UTC)

Book chapter resubmission feedback

 * 1) These changes were reviewed.
 * 2) Overall, minor changes have been made.
 * 3) The chapter is now over the maximum word count, so some of the additional content was ignored for marking purposes. For example, a lot of unnecessary general material was added to the Overview. Focus more directly on the topic (sustainable leadership) instead of the more general issues around sustainability.
 * 4) The focus questions have been improved.
 * 5) A case study was added, but it had nothing to do with sustainable leadership.
 * 6) Some general leadership theory is added, but it is not explained how this relates to sustainable leadership.
 * 7) No additional coverage of relevant research has been added.
 * 8) Some improvements have been made to spelling and grammar.
 * 9) Additional resources have been added to the See also section.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 14:37, 6 December 2021 (UTC)