Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/What the hell effect

Comments
Hi there, I really enjoyed reading your points on the what the hell effect, it is such an interesting phenomenon and I was surprised that I'd never heard of it before! Can't wait to read your full book chapter. I thought it might be useful to add some more interactive features to your chapter. I have found the quizzes to be a really useful tool and have provided the quiz format below. Nice work and good luck!

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{Question: |type=""} - True + False U3187813 (discuss • contribs) 05:38, 15 October 2021 (UTC)


 * This is so helpful! I deleted the quiz feature and have been trying to add it back but I kept messing up the code thank you sm! Gracehowie (discuss • contribs) 23:56, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

Hi! I love this chapter, maybe it is a little TOO relatable for me haha! I really enjoy the Youtube videos you have included. They make it extremely interactive and work as an interesting way to learn the topic.

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:36, 14 September 2021 (UTC)

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 * Thank you!! I'll fix that now :)) Gracehowie (discuss • contribs) 00:14, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi there!

What an interesting and relatable topic! I particularly enjoyed reading your points on how we can prevent the WTHE from occuring. Nevertheless, I do have some points which I hope help as you finish it off. Firstly, it is extremely important to acknowledge your sources. Doing so will make your work read more clearly, and help you avoid the consequences of plagarism. For example, in the origin paragraph, your opening sentence could instead be: The seminal study in relation to the WTHE was conducted by Polivy et al. (2010). Additionally, the shorter sentence is easier to read, and will help your work flow. Secondly, it is important to introduce your acronym. Here is a link to the APA 7th editions abbreviation guide - https://apastyle.apa.org/instructional-aids/abbreviations-guide.pdf. Secondly, you may want to review your use of quotation marks - https://apastyle.apa.org/style-grammar-guidelines/italics-quotations/quotation-marks. I hope these points help, and all the best with the rest of the semester!

U3202904 (discuss • contribs) 09:35, 15 October 2021 (UTC)


 * Hey! Thank you so much for the feedback! Fear not though, my chapter is far from done (especially the referencing lol) and I will definitely be correcting all of these pointers today. Gracehowie (discuss • contribs) 23:54, 16 October 2021 (UTC)

Italics and Figures
Hi Grace, This is looking really well developed. I would suggest adding captions for all your figures. It will help to link the images to the material. Also, it looks like you need to put italicise your ref list. this can be done through edit source. I hope this helps, Great work!

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:22, 11 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 21:40, 20 November 2021 (UTC)