Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2021/Wounded healer paradigm

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:59, 18 September 2021 (UTC)

Suggestions
Hello, this is a really interesting book chapter, I always wonder about the root of motivation people have to become a health professional. As James has already mentioned watch out for the casing, in your titles. I found this journal article 'Wounded Healer: Psychotherapist Grief Over a Client's Death' DOI: 10.1037/A0023788. I think you could incorporate this article really well into your chapter as a case study. The article goes into topics like countertransference, ethics and the mental wellbeing of the Psychotherapist. Best of luck! --U3217975 (discuss • contribs) 08:49, 10 October 2021 (UTC)

Hello, very unique topic and has a lot of potential in a modern setting if presented right. I would suggest adding features like case studies and reflective questions to help those reading this article and more pictures wouldn't/t hurt either. - u3203031

Grammar
Hi, I jumped in and corrected a typo in your work, but I also noticed some grammar errors. I would suggest copying it to a word document and sending it to Studiosity through Canvas. They currently have a 4-6 hour turn around, so you'll get it back in time to incorporate changes. Areas to focus on would be comma use for introductory clauses. this seemed to be happening throughout and i would suggest doing an in-depth proof read before submission tomorrow.

I would also suggest checking if you have used the best words throughout your work. For example, is anticipation the best word in this sentence? "Have you ever wondered why you have anticipation for a career in psychotherapy"

Thanks, Good luck (edited my own typo)

Suggestion
I found a research article that could help guide your research on the 'wounded healer paradigm'. https://www.tandfonline.com/doi/abs/10.1300/J287v03n01_13 U3201217 (discuss • contribs) 09:42, 17 October 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:20, 23 November 2021 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:02, 25 November 2021 (UTC)