Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Actively open-minded thinking

Suggestions for this chapter
Hello! I was reading through your book chapter which was really good but I think it would benefit from more images implemented into the page to make it more engaging. WikiCommons is a really good place to find images which can be easily inserted by copying the link of the image and pasting it in the search tab. As well as providing more hyperlinks to relevant theories and concepts could help as well. An example would be when you introduce the concept of self-efficacy, adding a hyperlink here could be very useful. Hope this helps! U3216389 (discuss • contribs) 01:36, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

Hi! just some feed back, just to make the book chapter more interact-active adding case studies throughout can help the reader solidify what they have read in the paragraph. Overall your book chapter looks like its coming along nicely! --U3230861 (discuss • contribs) 04:06, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

Hi there! Some positive feedback to make your page even better! Breaking up all that text with a few more images would have made the chapter visually more engaging. Also think about including some external learning resources such as a podcast from the respected location, or even a related video via Youtube. Overall, your page is great!(U3215755 (discuss • contribs)(U3215755 (discuss • contribs) 05:51, 24 August 2023 (UTC))

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 11:01, 30 September 2022 (UTC)

Comments
Hi, your chapter looks great however I think some more explanation you the theory and please don't forget your case study to help reader understanding your topic. Additionally, remember to focus on your main topic "How can AOT be used to improve human performance?", here are some reference that might be useful for you.

Karlsson, P. E., Braun, S., Broadmeadow, M., Elvira, S., Emberson, L., Gimeno, B. S., ... & Wilkinson, M. (2007). Risk assessments for forest trees: the performance of the ozone flux versus the AOT concepts. Environmental Pollution, 146(3), 608-616.

Haran, U., Ritov, I., & Mellers, B. A. (2013). The role of actively open-minded thinking in information acquisition, accuracy, and calibration. Jingru shao 0906 (discuss • contribs) 13:55, 14 October 2022 (UTC)

Feedback
Hello there!! really great job and well structured book chapter. from first viewing was very capturing. My one suggestion is to maybe add hyperlinks throuhgout the help the reader be accessable to other sources that may explain key concepts and ideas throughout your chapter. This can be a major factor within your overview section in particular. U3216563 (discuss • contribs) 06:18, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

Hello, your book chapter is enticing. However, addition of multiple peer-reviewed articles could assist with the validity of some statements. As mentioned above, hyperlinks, as well as case studies, are a great way to maintain interest and deeper understanding throughout the chapter. - edit by Msherrybarr (discuss • contribs) 02:24, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:06, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:03, 9 November 2022 (UTC)