Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Fatigue and emotion

Suggestions for this chapter
Hello! Great book chapter, very in depth and looks like a lot of research has been done. I would suggest using hyperlinks in your page liking to relevant theories that you mention. I have done an example hyperlink in your page to show where you could possibly implement these. Hope this helps U3216389 (discuss • contribs) 05:54, 13 October 2022 (UTC)

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:56, 1 October 2022 (UTC)

feedback for book chapter
Hi there, great job on your book chapter. It has been well developed with great research and content. One suggestion that I will make so it is easier for your reader who has further curiosity is to implement hyperlinks or external sources (footnotes) throughout your writing. This will make it easier for individuals who need to do an external reading on a concept or need a description of a major idea within your topic.

However, everything looks and reads very well and easily. Keep up the good work :) U3216563 (discuss • contribs) 06:03, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

General feedback
Hey! great work so far you have such an interesting topic. I just noticed some formatting errors within your reference list, I would look to italicise names of journals by adding two apostrophes when source editing :) JaimeTegan (discuss • contribs) 06:34, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:46, 2 November 2022 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:32, 9 November 2022 (UTC)