Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Insular cortex and emotion

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It would be great for your book chapter to look into the theory of the mind for your theories of emotions section!

U3215103 (discuss • contribs) 12:25, 28 August 2022 (UTC)

Feedback on plan
Overall, the plan for this chapter looks promising: Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:38, 7 October 2022 (UTC)
 * title/sub-title correct
 * 2-level heading structure promising; consider expanding to flesh out
 * Overview text can be briefer. Aim to capture attention with illustration of the "problem", highlight focus questions, and consider including an example/case study and an image
 * Good use of embedded links for key words; also consider linking like this to related book chapters (e.g., see Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Cortex)
 * References are well formatted except for some lacking italicisation
 * Resources (See also and External links) look excellent

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:42, 29 October 2022 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 01:07, 7 November 2022 (UTC)