Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Money priming, motivation, and emotion

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:04, 27 September 2022 (UTC)

In text citation
Hi,

Looks like your chapter is well developed - it is certainly an interesting read! One thing I noticed is some inconsistencies with your in-text citations, for example:

- (Aghakhani, et al., 2019) - This should not have a comma immediately after author's name

-... behaviour (Jiang et al., 2014; Sanfey et al., 2003. Money... - This one needs a closing bracket after your citations

-... In a study done by Chan et al., (2021), it was... - This one should not have a comma after et al.

-... as procrastination (Kennedy and Tuckman, 2013).These ... - This one should be '&' rather than 'and' since it is within the brackets.

Hope that helps, good luck! U3217287 (discuss • contribs) 01:37, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

Suggestion
Hi there, it looks like you've done a great job. I've done some minor proof-reading and editing that I hope improves clarity. There were a couple of sentences where I wasn't entirely sure what you meant and I've added clarification templates to help you find them when you do your own final read-through. I also noticed that you haven't referred to figures 1, 3 or 5 in the main body of your text. Good luck with your final polishing! U3141987 (discuss • contribs) 04:37, 15 October 2022 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:41, 5 November 2022 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:11, 8 November 2022 (UTC)