Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Perfectionism

Topic development feedback
Hi there, it looks like you're making great progress. I have made some minor grammatical changes that I hope improve the clarity of some sections. I also wondered whether your third SDT paragraph should read "Harvey et al. (2015) researched how the two forms of perfectionism were linked to university students' motivation to pursue academic goals during a semester. Their results demonstrated that perfectionistic concerns were significantly positively related to autonomous motivation"? Good luck with the rest of your chapter. U3141987 (discuss • contribs) 01:31, 10 October 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi there, thankyou for your feedback. You were definitely right re: the Harvey et al. (2015) observation, thankyou! I ended up having too many words so have had to delete that section. I appreciate the time you put into reading my chapter! Many thanks AEMOR (discuss • contribs) 23:18, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

Hi, I feel that maybe the definition of perfectionism could be expanded. For instance how it manifests in people differently. - U3216502

Hello!

I was reading through your plan so far for the topic development, it all sounds really good and its clear you've done thorough research, great work! I did have a suggestion that perhaps after the sections involving theory at the start of the chapter, maybe you could put a short quiz in there? I just know as a uni student that theory can be a lot to read through sometimes so a quiz might break up the information and keep the reader engaged.

Best of luck! Sophia246 (discuss • contribs) 12:50, 28 August 2022 (UTC)


 * Hi there,
 * Thankyou for your suggestion, I think that's a great idea! I have now added a quiz in my book chapter AEMOR (discuss • contribs) 23:16, 12 October 2022 (UTC)

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