Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2022/Time management

Suggestion
Hi there, it looks like you've put heaps of effort into this chapter, and there's tons of great info and resources. I had a look and it seems like you're a fair way over the word count. When I read through the chapter, I'm not entirely clear on how the section on intrinsic vs extrinsic motivation relates to time management or ties in with the other theories you discuss. Given how far over the word count you are, I'd suggest cutting that whole section. I know it's a pain to have to leave out stuff you've worked hard on, but better that your most relevant info gets assessed! Good luck, U3141987 (discuss • contribs) 10:05, 14 October 2022 (UTC)

Suggestion and feedback
Hi there, what an interesting topic! As the person in charge of the perfectionism book chapter I really related to the section on time management and perfectionism and very much agree on their linking. I have formatted most of your images as per APA style (Figure #.) but just remember to link the images into your text eg. The pickle jar theory (see Figure 1).

I have also gone through and have fixed a lot of grammar and spelling errors and have noticed that a lot of your references within the text are incorrectly formatted/the text needs a reference eg the intrinsic and extrinsic motivation sections. I have also removed a lot of capitalisations as per wiki style. Additionally, I think you may be about 2000 words over the limit which is also something to consider. Remember the marker doesn't read past 4000 words so make sure all your important points are within that bracket!

Many thanks and all the best for the rest of your book chapter.

AEMOR (discuss • contribs) 02:31, 16 October 2022 (UTC)

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