Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Death drive

Initial suggestions
Thanks for tackling this topic.

Some initial suggestions:


 * Note that there was a previous attempt, so check out that chapter and the feedback on its talk page.
 * Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
 * Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Death
 * Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Drive
 * Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Psychodynamics
 * What psychological theories can help to understand? What is the main research in this area?

Let me know if I can do anything else as you go along.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:38, 6 August 2023 (UTC)

Hi there,

As I was reading your chapter, could you perhaps include a section on differentiating between death drive and suicidal ideation. I had an assumption at first that the two concepts are similar, but maybe they influence each other? This would be a great idea to avoid confusion which can further clarify the main concept behind death drive. Your chosen topic is very fascinating, because when I saw the topic, I realised that I was interested in the content. I am looking forward to reading your complete book chapter!

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:28, 23 September 2023 (UTC)

Edits
Hi there,

This was such an interesting chapter, well done! You have provided great information and some really relevant sources. I have proofread your chapter and made some adjustments I thought would better fit the marking criteria. I fixed up some of your spelling, grammar, and punctuation, and also added clarification templates where I thought you could do something differently. I moved the figure up to your scenario as it was relevant there. I also created a coloured box and small image around your quiz to look more enticing. Finally, I just fixed up some doi hyperlinks in your reference list.

Great job! Please reply if you have any questions about the changes I've made.

U3223909 (discuss • contribs) 01:51, 4 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi,
 * Thank you so much for your feedback, I have found it very helpful! U3197031 (discuss • contribs) 00:19, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Edits
Hi this is looking great so far. Just a small edit, this sentence could be deleted as it is repetitive.

'Freud proposed that life drive was opposed by the Eros and then later maintained the life drive was opposed by the death drive. ' --KATE HERLIHY (discuss • contribs) 05:43, 5 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hi,
 * Thank you for pointing this out to me! U3197031 (discuss • contribs) 00:21, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

Edits
Hi, your chapter was very interesting and informative. I liked the images you have included to make it more interactive. I have made some changes to the errors in your reference list, I hope you don't mind! I have noticed some texts to be chunky (I understand that it is very difficult to summarise everything into such short texts); it might benefit from the use of dot points or tables to make your main ideas clearer. Jingying Chen (discuss • contribs) 20:00, 19 October 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:35, 31 October 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 09:39, 9 November 2023 (UTC)