Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Indigenous Australian mindfulness

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-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:57, 18 September 2023 (UTC)

Edits and feedback
Hi,

I really enjoyed reading this chapter and think this is such a wonderful topic to write a chapter on. I have read and made some adjustments to assist in the development of your chapter by adding some clarification templates in areas I thought needed expansion or clarification. I thought under the mindfulness heading it might be a good idea to provide an example of conventional mindfulness (visulisation exercises, square breathing). Under the self-determination theory heading it might be useful to provide a short scenario/case study to help explain SDT. I also noticed that your figures currently don't match the text they are related to. I have added a clarification template in these sections. I really enjoyed the examples of Aboriginal mindfulness, as this is something I have no previous knowledge on! Good work on creating such an engaging topic! and please reply if you have any questions about any of the changes U3197031 (discuss • contribs) 04:37, 5 October 2023 (UTC)

Hi there,

I enjoyed reading your chapter and you have made great progress. I was thinking maybe it would be beneficial if you decrease the amount of focus questions you have? James advised 3-5 focus questions.

Great work otherwise.--MaryamNageeb (discuss • contribs) 12:29, 7 October 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:27, 27 October 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:04, 6 November 2023 (UTC)