Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Narrative therapy and emotion

Initial suggestions
Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions: Let me know if I can do anything else as you go along. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:05, 10 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
 * Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Emotion
 * Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Psychotherapy
 * What psychological theories can help to understand? What is the main research in this area?

Additional avenues?
Despite having done my own assignment work on this topic, I think you have done a great job of describing quite a challenging topic. One area of therapy/concept you may find also interesting is the First Nations idea of Social and Emotional well-being- there is a crossover of ideas and themes between the two and this may be an interesting way of incorporating cross-cultural applications.

This therapy also stands out as it was created with a focus on how we speak and construct our language with concepts like social constructionism and externalising the problem.

U3216125 (discuss • contribs) 04:09, 8 October 2023 (UTC)

Potential Article
Hi @Alyssa.marin here is an article that could be useful for you book chapter! It also includes some pros and cons.

What is Narrative Therapy? Ashhstarr (discuss • contribs) 07:30, 23 August 2023 (UTC)--Ashhstarr (discuss • contribs) 07:31, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:45, 26 September 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 12:40, 3 November 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:54, 7 November 2023 (UTC)

Resubmission feedback
I've reviewed these changes:

Thank-you for the improvements which seem to mainly be:
 * 1) Some content has been removed (presumably because it was genAI content)
 * 2) Some peer-reviewed citations have been added
 * 3) Other minor text changes such as American to Australian spelling

However, there are still some issues to addressed with regard to the lack of appropriate citation, including:
 * 1) Some  tags have been removed without removal of the corresponding content and/or addition of appropriate peer-reviewed citation
 * 2) Some  tags have been left in place. These should be resolved by either removing the content or adding appropriate citation.
 * 3) Some  tags have been left in place even though appropriate citation has been added; in these cases, the  tag should be removed
 * 4) It is OK not to attribute the headings to ChatGPT (this is relatively minor and breaks the narrative, so remove that acknowledgement); far more important is to provide appropriate citations for the main content in each of the sections
 * 5) Non-academic webpages (e.g., NorthStar Transitions, 2022) are insufficient as citations. Remove them, but these links can be used in the External links section

Addressing these issues is likely to require some rewriting. The end point should be content that addresses the question and is clearly based on the best peer-reviewed psychological theory and research about the topic.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:36, 24 November 2023 (UTC)

Resubmission feedback 2
I've reviewed all changes since the original submission:
 * 1) Overall, the revised chapter remains insufficient as a cogent synthesis of the best peer-reviewed psychological theory and research about this topic.
 * 2) The chapter now better indicates where ChatGPT was used. However, this information is general, breaks the flow, and there remains insufficient citation of specifically which sentences and paragraphs used ChatGPT as the source, per APA recommended style for citing ChatGPT.
 * 3) I tried out one of the ChatGPT prompts and it did not seem to produce anything like the corresponding content in the chapter (e.g., https://chat.openai.com/share/deaeb151-335f-4048-b77a-c6badd6eb3b1)
 * 4) ~6 citations to academic, peer-reviewed sources have been added with some expanded content which improves the chapter somewhat
 * 5) Some content has been removed (presumably because it lacked originality and/or appropriate source(s))
 * 6) Despite requests to use academic, primary, peer-reviewed citations and to move links to non-peer-reviewed sources into the "External links" section, many non-peer-reviewed citations have been retained (e.g., wheel of emotions)
 * 7) Despite requests to use academic, primary, peer-reviewed citations and to move links to non-peer-reviewed sources into the "External links" section, much of the additional content uses non-peer-reviewed citations, particularly verywellmind.com (n = ~12)
 * 8) The source for the content of several sections is now more clearly acknowledged as being based on ChatGPT (e.g., the use of Plutchik's wheel of emotions in narrative therapy). However, no evidence is presented that these claims have any academic basis. This lack of academic discipline is unprofessional and can lead to serious professional consequences (e.g., https://www.cbsnews.com/colorado/news/colorado-lawyer-artificial-intelligence-suspension/). The genAI guidelines for the unit include that "All claims need to be supported by verified peer-reviewed citations which you have consulted ... Recommended uses of genAI tools include brainstorming, explaining key concepts, synthesising complex ideas, rephrasing to improve readability, improving the quality of written expression, checking spelling and grammar, and image generation". Instead, ChatGPT appears to have been used as an end-point (to generate and lightly reword content) rather than as a starting-point for further investigation.
 * 9) Some of the new content appears to be plagiarised e.g., "Deconstruction is used to help people gain clarity in their stories. When a problematic story feels like it has been around for a long time, people might use generalized statements and become confused in their own stories. A narrative therapist would work with the individual to break down their story into smaller parts, clarifying the problem and making it more approachable." from verywellmind is almost identical to "Deconstruction: This technique is used to help people gain clarity in their stories. When a problematic story feels like it has been prolonged, people might use generalised statements and become confused in their own stories. A narrative therapist would work with the individual to break down their story into smaller parts, clarifying the problem and making it more approachable." which was has been added.
 * 10) Further overreliance on the words of others rather than reading, understanding, and re-expressing in the author's own words has been introduced e.g., use of direct quotes: "children receiving narrative therapy intervention showed a significant improvement in self-awareness, self-management, social awareness/empathy, and responsible decision making when compared to their own first stories and the stories from children in the control group. Improvement in relationship skills was present in both cohorts but was significant only for the second year." (Beaudoin et al., 2016)
 * 11) A mixture of APA style and wiki style citations are used. Adopt one style.

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:18, 26 November 2023 (UTC)

Resubmission feedback 3
I've reviewed these changes since resubmission 2:
 * The chapter has been significantly improved by now being more strongly based on primary, academic, peer-reviewed sources
 * The chapter has been significantly improved by no longer being based on genAI and non-academic sources

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 23:02, 3 December 2023 (UTC)