Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Tragic optimism

Initial suggestions
Thanks for tackling this topic. Some initial suggestions: Let me know if I can do anything else as you go along. Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 07:21, 9 August 2023 (UTC)
 * Check out other related chapters and see how you can build on, link to, and integrate with that work:
 * Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Optimism
 * Category:Motivation and emotion/Book/Psychological resilience
 * What psychological theories can help to understand? What is the main research in this area?

Heading casing

 * Thank you for pointing that out James, I don't know why I capitalise every word . I will be sure to fix that! Alice hatcher (discuss • contribs) 12:47, 23 August 2023 (UTC)

Feedback
Hi Alice, This is a really interesting and important topic, I wonder if you could add a section under the fostering heading around the use of therapeutic approaches This article is an example of https://doi.org/10.1080/09515070.2019.1633497 integrating TO into other therapies. also don't forget to add some references before tomorrow, looking forward to seeing what you come up with. --U3209567 (discuss • contribs) 00:37, 24 August 2023 (UTC)


 * Hey,
 * Thank you very much for your suggestion. Ive had a read and it shows to give me some great options to add to my chapter so thanks heaps!! goodluck with your chapter! Alice hatcher (discuss • contribs) 04:45, 24 August 2023 (UTC)

Hi again Alice, Your progress is looking good, you are certainly covering a lot =). I have gone through and done some edits, mostly on spelling and occasionally on word choice or coherency See here . Just a tip writing things that people are going to read, try and say things in the simplest way possible, and avoid phrases like "in fact", as they are more phrases of speech, rather than of writing (or at least that is what I have found.) Look forward to seeing the final product. --U3209567 (discuss • contribs) 01:29, 4 October 2023 (UTC)


 * Hey, thank you so much for looking at my chapter, i really appreciate it. I will make sure to keep that in mind when editing my final Alice hatcher (discuss • contribs) 09:29, 4 October 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:18, 26 September 2023 (UTC)

In-text referencing
, I noticed some of your in-text references weren’t formatted according to APA 7. For example, (Leung, Arslan & Wong, 2021) should instead be written as (Leung et al., 2021). I flagged these in the chapter so hopefully that makes it easier to detect these minor errors. Your topic sounds interesting, I look forward to reading when you’re done! 😊 Emma

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 03:47, 5 November 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 02:13, 12 November 2023 (UTC)