Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2023/Uncertainty and emotion

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 22:52, 20 November 2023 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 08:55, 21 November 2023 (UTC)

Book chapter resubmission
These changes where reviewed:
 * 1) Overview
 * 2) A brief scenario has been added
 * 3) An image has been added
 * 4) A clarification tag  has been removed without addition of clarifying content (I've added a clarifying link)
 * 5) An embedded interwiki link to another book chapter has been added
 * 6) A broken has been added to Tip: Uncertainty vs Risk (I've removed it)
 * 7) A moderate amount of additional theoretical content about uncertainty has been added; however, it not clear how this content relates to the topic (uncertainty and emotion)
 * 8) An image has been uploaded but is missing key information File:Illness.png and appears to be falsely claimed as own work . I've nominated the image for deletion.
 * 9) Several direct quotes have been added without page numbers; this demonstrates little to no understanding and does not use APA style. It is far better to express concepts in your own words to demonstrate your own understanding.
 * 10) APA 7th ed. style for three or more citations is not used; similar APA style citations are not used for citations with two authors (learn when to use ampersand and when to use "and")
 * 11) A moderate amount of an additional content about the relationship between the BIS and uncertainty has been added. This is useful material.
 * 12) A moderate amount of additional material about uncertainty-identity theory has been added
 * 13) A new section about uncertainty tolerance has been added
 * 14) Moderate review of additional research has been added
 * 15) The Conclusion has been strengthened

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:24, 27 November 2023 (UTC)

Multimedia presentation resubmission
The resubmitted presentation has been reviewed:
 * 1) The presentation is over the time limit
 * 2) The presentation lacks sufficient focus on the relationship between U and E
 * 3) The presentation starts to address the topic at ~1:40 mins
 * 4) There is too much text on each slide
 * 5) The Kings College study is not in the book chapter?
 * 6) The audio content appears to be incomplete (e.g., at ~2:45 mins)
 * 7) The Conclusion only partly fits within the time limit
 * 8) Meta-data
 * 9) The title and sub-title are now used
 * 10) A good description is now provided
 * 11) A link to the book chapter is now provided
 * 12) Licensing
 * 13) A license is provided in the description but not the licensing meta-data field
 * 14) The image attributions indicate that this presentation has used copyright-restricted images without permission of the copyright owners

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:37, 27 November 2023 (UTC)