Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/Diet, weight loss, and emotion

Comments
Hi, seems like you have made a good start here and I look forward to reading more on your topic. Jessica.h 07:53, 25 October 2011 (UTC)

Hi, This is such a big topic these days. It's all over T.V and in the printed press. There seems to be such a broad amount of diets available, so much I find it all a bit confusing. I'm looking forward to your finished chapter! Goodluck :) Jemmasanderson 00:06, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Heya! Your chapter is looking pretty pretty interesting so far. I think we will have alot of common themes, particularly relating to the fact that restricting food intake causes people to actually gain weight and that emotion has a lot to do with failing in a diet. Would you be happy to link our chapters together? http://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/Overeating Cheers Claremw 06:13, 3 November 2011 (UTC)

Subheadings

Great read flows well. Not sure if you want to keep your subheadings breif so its easier to follow? Miz.mira 06:13, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Draft comments
I've had a quick look at your draft. Some comments:
 * 1) There is a lovely balance between theory/research and practical self-help focus - this is excellent. So, in further drafting I would simply continue to improve/refine what you have, plus address APA of references and check the edit history - I made some 'wikifications' and left some notes e.g., in the External links section

Sincerely, James -- Jtneill - Talk - c 00:15, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

I have indented your reference list. As per your request. Miz.mira 07:31, 6 November 2011 (UTC) Good quiz - really interesting information - well done - Magnolia

Rfoster 07:01, 28 November 2011 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 04:36, 10 December 2011 (UTC)