Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/Healthy eating

Hi, this page looks like it's coming along well. I was wondering whether you will be looking at healthier options that are becoming available at stores for example McDonald's salads. Maybe you could discuss whether they are as healthy as they make out because they are processed? Also perhaps how advertising affects our perceptions of healthy eating. Looking forward to seeing this develop. Rednoodles 01:29, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

hey your page ist starting to look great, have you thought about adding some tables? are you going to be looking at any phsychological theory for healthy eating? just a thought Shanti 07:29, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

Hey, Your page appears to becoming along beautifully. I am really enjoying the healthy eating subject as its something i should probably look into :) perhaps adding a bit of colour to the page to give it some flare would go really nicely along with a few more pictures and tables. Also perhaps one of those pyramids kind of like the maslow's hierarchy of needs except the one with healthy foods in it might flow really well with your subject. good luck and cant wait to see the end product --EssDubz 09:50, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

Hi. Your page so far looks good. You've done some great research and applied it in an interesting way. Just a few suggestions, but maybe you could focus on the social or cultrual variables on eating or over eating. I think you tend to eat more in groups or when you're around others who are eating. With this in mind you could also provide a contrasting view of Anorexia or bulimia. Also you could add in restraint release which would help the argument of why dieting (particularly 'fad' diets just don't work). But I also agree with Shanti, some physiological theories would really work well in this chapter, or maybe the benefits of healthy eating on mood. Best of luck with it! U3033746 22:16, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

This is an interesting topic because I think many of us can relate to pitfalls in unhealthy eating. Maybe you could include a case study or eating plan to show an example of healthy eating that can be applied in real-life? Nice job AngeM 23:26, 2 November 2011 (UTC)

Hi There,Looks like you page is coming along nicely. I was just thinking it may be worth adding a bit more colour to the page, maybe to highlight certain information. Apart from that, very informative and looks like you are on the right track.Trinand 11:29, 4 November 2011 (UTC)

Hi Kayla :-) I had a read through your page because the topic attracted me... looks like many others were interested too ^^. In addition to what the others have said, I have two notes: - I was thinking that perhaps you could change your heading 'Healthy eating barriers many men face' to something like 'gender differences in barriers to healthy eating'... that would sit better with me for some reason. - Also, I know you haven't done your references yet but I think that you should make sure you reference the healthy eating guidelines for Australia. I think that I heard something about those being updated... so that it doesn't focus around the 'this many serves of this' per day idea. I'm not 100% sure how to reference that handout but it might go something like this: Children's Health Development Foundation. (1998). The Australian Guide to Healthy Eating: Background Information for Consumers. Victoria, Australia:Author. Retrieved 5 November, 2011, from: http://www.health.gov.au/internet/main/publishing.nsf/content/E384CFA588B74377CA256F190004059B/$File/fd-cons.pdf KristaLeanne 09:50, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

Hi - intresting read. However just an asthetic point, were you going to add any more pictures? Or maybe something interactive such as a quiz or a 'did you know' section? Otherwise...great job! LanaJ 02:12, 6 November 2011 (UTC)

Great information - this is the type of article that should be submitted to magazines - well done - Magnolia28

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Great read flows well. Not sure if you want to make your subheadings shorter so it's to the point? Welldone otherwise! Miz.mira 06:08, 5 November 2011 (UTC)

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