Talk:Motivation and emotion/Textbook/Emotion/Emotional stability

Feedback
I just checked in on this page and noted that it is coming well towards a first draft. Some suggestions: -- Jtneill - Talk - c 13:25, 31 October 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Use some headings ==Heading text== will create Level 2 headings (this would be for your major sections) and ===Heading text=== for the next levels. This will then mean that an automatic table of contents is created for your chapter.
 * 2) Check grammar for ownership apostrophes e.g., I changed someones -> someone's but there are others too.
 * 3) More explanation might be helpful about the distinction between brain and mind (if this is an important distinction)
 * 4) More justification for the initial focus on trauma and emotional stability/instability would be useful - e.g., first explain the emotional brain and emotional mind (or justify why the focus is initially on trauma). It might be helpful to explain/define trauma given the emphasis on it.
 * 5) APA style:
 * 6) No year for subsequent citations within a paragraph. e.g., Bloggs (2010). But then only refer to Bloggs within the same paragraph.
 * 7) Include page numbers for direct quotes
 * 8) Check formatting of references, especially use of capitalisation and italics.
 * 9) Consider adding captions to images.
 * 10) Also see some other edits I made as I read through:

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:46, 12 December 2010 (UTC)

-- Jtneill - Talk - c 10:36, 14 December 2010 (UTC)