Talk:Motivation and emotion/Textbook/Motivation/Sexual motivation

Quote
wot no quote? - no worries either ways, but I thought the quote was quite apt :-) cheers, Privatemusings 01:06, 17 September 2010 (UTC) course I would think that, having popped it in!
 * I left a note here as well :-) Privatemusings 10:15, 19 September 2010 (UTC)

Feedback
I've had a quick over the draft so far. Here's some comments hopefully to help you along. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 06:58, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Overall, I like the structure and scope.
 * 2) I've added some initial project boxes
 * 3) I tweaked some of the heading levels
 * 4) Introduction
 * 5) Good, friendly introduction.
 * 6) Maybe add a second paragraph that fleshes out some focus questions and/or explains the structure/content for the chapter (tell the reader what is ahead).
 * 7) Maybe consider psychoanalytic/psychoanalysis perspectives
 * 8) Maybe consider sexual motivation across cultures
 * 9) Might be interesting to report some Australian statistics if they're available e.g., http://www.abc.net.au/science/features/sexstatistics/
 * 10) Physiology of Sexual Motivation
 * 11) Maybe mention that people with paralysis still experience sexual arousal.
 * 12) APA style
 * 13) For subsequent citations within a paragraph, don't include the year e.g., Kaplan (1979), but the only Kaplan.