Talk:Motivation and emotion/Textbook/Motivation and personality

Feedback
Here's some feedback on your draft so far - hope this helps. -- Jtneill - Talk - c 05:01, 5 November 2010 (UTC)
 * 1) Introduction
 * 2) I tweaked the introduction a bit - see what you think and of course keep rewriting it as you see fit. I really like that you've made a concerted effort to connect personality with motivation.
 * 3) Check APA citation style throughout - there are many small proofreading corrections to be made for good APA style for citations
 * 4) Headings
 * 5) Add a next level of heading using ==== instead of the underlines - this way these headings will appear in the tables of contents (TOC)
 * 6) 5-factor personality model
 * 7) Rewrite: "Another study that researched the relationship between the five personality traits and the motivation to learn found extraversion, in particular the facets of activity and positive emotions, openness to experience, in particular the facets of ideas and values and conscientiousness, in particular the facets of competence, dutifulness and achievement striving were all positive predictors of the motivation to learn"
 * 8) This section could possibly be abbreviated a bit, but it is key to the chapter. I would like to see some more introduction and conclusion emphasising what the main connections are between the Big 5 and Motivation.
 * 9) LOC
 * 10) Add http://onlinelibrary.wiley.com/doi/10.1002/job.416/pdf
 * 11) Eysenck
 * 12) Add File:Hans.Eysenck.jpg
 * 13) Other Personality Traits and Motivation
 * 14) I'd perhaps rename this as arousal and/or sensation seeking or something like that - to give it some more shape/focus.