Talk:WikiJournal Preprints/Body image disturbance in eating disorders

Plagiarism check
✅ Report from the WMF copyvios tool flagged some false positives (not regarded as plagiarism) due to common stock phrases. Totaled 23.1% with 'violation unlikely' with regard to plagiarism. Please see the results here Rwatson1955 (discuss • contribs)

Few things I noticed

 * 1) Should be made clear not all of those who have BID have an eating disorder.
 * 2) Another set of causes is also verbal, such as fat shaming, seeing images on tv or print of skinny girls in skin-tight clothes, getting the most expensive new perfume and this list can go on.
 * 3) I would put the definition as your second section (however) quite a few sections keep hitting on the definition so I'd recommend re-reading and doing an outline for better placement and to remove redundancy. 2600:8801:CA05:EF00:4037:41C6:FFFB:4904 (discuss) 12:16, 31 March 2023 (UTC)
 * @ I thank the reviewer for their valuable advice. Following their recommendations, I've updated the highlighted sections and I feel the text has significantly improved. The reviewer's detailed input and efforts were crucial in refining the document. Srobodao84 (discuss • contribs) 00:23, 9 March 2024 (UTC)

First peer review
 OhanaUnited  Talk page  21:08, 11 September 2023 (UTC)


 * Thank you very much for your kind words and constructive feedback on the article. I greatly appreciate your detailed assessment and the positive remarks. I must admit, I wasn't aware of the recent updates on Wikipedia, and I'm grateful you brought this to my attention.
 * Regarding the revisions, I would like to inquire if it's permissible to make the suggested amendments directly on the article in the "page" section, as one would typically do for a normal edit on Wikipedia. This approach would allow for a more streamlined and efficient updating process.
 * I will soon start working on writing the recommended sections, including "Limitations and Future Directions" and the general conclusion or implications. These additions, as you rightly pointed out, will significantly enhance the article's utility and impact.
 * Once again, thank you for your excellent suggestions and for taking the time to review the work. Your guidance is immensely valuable.
 * Best regards, Srobodao84 (discuss • contribs) 09:55, 8 March 2024 (UTC)
 * @Rwatson1955, please see the author's reply.  OhanaUnited  Talk page  03:10, 11 March 2024 (UTC)

Second peer review
 OhanaUnited  Talk page  00:00, 19 September 2023 (UTC)


 * @OhanaUnited Thank you very much for the 2nd revier's feedback on my work. I've reviewed her suggestions and aligned the text accordingly, improving certain details. I did not incorporate all the proposed articles, as some didn't seem essential for a thorough review.
 * I've added to the missing sections, though not exhaustively, to avoid overloading the text on body dissatisfaction. I aimed to distinguish this from body image disorder, emphasizing that the latter involves altered body shape perception, not just dissatisfaction.
 * Appreciate the insights so much. Srobodao84 (discuss • contribs) 00:18, 9 March 2024 (UTC)
 * @Rwatson1955 Please also see this author's reply to the second peer review. Thanks.  OhanaUnited  Talk page  03:11, 11 March 2024 (UTC)