User:Connorkaye

My Chapter: Empathy and wellbeing

Content Contributions

 * 1) Suggested using DSM IV reference to define bi-polar disorder   https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AMotivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FBipolar_disorder_and_motivation_in_the_work_place&type=revision&diff=1449297&oldid=1449292
 * 2) Suggested subject to be investigated. Linked to useful articles that I used in a previous assignment on the same subject. https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Exercise_and_motivation&diff=1449303&oldid=1416418
 * 3) Suggested a subject to include in chapter. Suggested using interviews as to enhance argument  https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AMotivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FPole_dancing_motivation&type=revision&diff=1449312&oldid=1446604
 * 4) Suggested an interesting meta-review on the subject    https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AMotivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FFilicide_motivation&type=revision&diff=1449327&oldid=1447695
 * 5) Suggested theory to include related psychopathy and my topic (empathy). Also suggested a useful quote to demonstrate an aspect of psychopathy. Provided wiki links to useful researchers. Suggested a useful book I read on the subject of psychopathy. https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AMotivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FPsychopathy_and_emotion&type=revision&diff=1449351&oldid=1442516
 * 6) Suggested an article I used in my own chapter that was related to bullying and empathy. I summarised some of the findings and how they were relevant for the author to look at quickly. https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AMotivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FBullying_and_pack_behavior_motivation_in_adolescents&type=revision&diff=1450132&oldid=1449349
 * 7) Suggested a rewording of a sentence and also suggested another heading under academic achievement which could look as gender differences.   https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AMotivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FPersonality_and_achievement_motivation&type=revision&diff=1451692&oldid=1451596
 * 8) Suggested how to make the chapter more readable. Suggested a subject for a quiz. Suggested how to format interesting anecdotes throughout chapter. https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk%3AMotivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FPersonality_and_achievement_motivation&type=revision&diff=1460813&oldid=1455613

Grammar

 * 1) I fixed up some of the grammar. A full stop was out of place.  https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Zeigarnik_effect&oldid=1452210
 * 2) I fixed up the box for you by correcting the script.  https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Motivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FPersonality_and_achievement_motivation&type=revision&diff=1459241&oldid=1459199

Moodle

 * 1) Suggested how to use pictures to greater effect. http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=369032#p915995
 * 2) Suggested how to format boxes for greater readability. Suggested how to improve visual flow. Suggested lowering word-count. http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=369099#p915996
 * 3) I suggested not using the textbook as a reference even though it is a useful source of information. I recommended the proper length for a paragraph in order to remain readable. I also suggested including a take home message http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=370515#p918869
 * 4) Suggested changing a heading or including a summary. Suggested including a source for a quote.  http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=370398#p918870
 * 5) Suggested how to format the overview. Suggested moving boxes of text to make the page flow better. Suggested how to improve grammar in accordance with wikiversity grammar style. http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=370030#p919045