User:Tessa Power

Student ID: u3068542

Social Contributions:
For ease I have provided the social contributions I've made to other wikiversity pages below.


 * https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Grief_and_health&oldid=1444635: Hi there, I'm loving your chapter, especially the layout; it looks really nice and clean so far. One small pick up, under types of grief in Chronic Grief, you have two small errors. There is an S missing after task in this sentence "they are not making progress and fail to complete task involved in the grief process" and the other is the "Absent or Delayed Grief:" paragraph starts halfway through the chronic grief para instead of below it. Hope this helps. -- Tessa U3068542 (discuss • contribs) 17:22, 27 September 2015 (UTC)
 * https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Mood_variation_over_the_week&oldid=1447250: Hey there, I'm liking your page so far. The quote box at the start looks really good, and is a good introduction and causes the reader to stop and think. The only part i'm not sure I like though is the quiz as I'm not sure what purpose it is serving. While I think it is a nice interactive feature I don't understand it's usefulness. Perhaps it might be better to have a quiz that tests the readers knowledge that they've learnt by reading your page? I also really like the above suggestion about a chart showing the ups and downs of mood over a week, i think that would be a really cool addition! Good Luck with the rest of it! --Tessa Power (discuss • contribs) 08:34, 12 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 23:51, 16 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Menstrual cycle and emotion ‎(minor edits - fixed some typos on page).
 * 01:39, 23 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-3,948)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Hot memory and emotion ‎(minor edits direct to page - spacing and typos)
 * 01:47, 23 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Reading motivation in young learners ‎ (→‎Self determination theory) (minor edit - fixed spacing)
 * 09:24, 23 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Menstrual cycle and emotion ‎ (Minor edit - fixed extra space between PMS and comma)
 * 09:32, 23 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-5)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Menstrual cycle and emotion ‎ (minor edit - corrected a few small typo's)
 * 09:36, 23 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-5)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Menstrual cycle and emotion ‎ (minor edit - changed 'How' and 'Why' to lowercase)
 * 10:29, 23 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-1)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Zeigarnik effect ‎ (minor edit - changed An to A)
 * https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Life_after_death_motivation&oldid=1460198: Hey, I'm liking your chapter so far, good topic choice, it looks like it would be really interesting! Have you looked into different psychologists and their views on religion. I know Sigmund Freud has an interesting take on religion and why humans 'need' god and religion. It could be useful to incorporate his views. Tessa Power (discuss • contribs) 10:38, 23 October 2015 (UTC)
 * 04:58, 24 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+18)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Down syndrome and emotion ‎ (Minor edit - fixed spacing in references)
 * 05:02, 24 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-2)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Down syndrome and emotion ‎ (Minor edit - amended some typos and grammatical errors)
 * 05:04, 24 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-74)‎ . . m Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Down syndrome and emotion ‎ (Minor edit - code fix - removed the "bulleted list item" from end of each bullet point)
 * 05:18, 24 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+1)‎ . . m Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Filicide motivation ‎ (Minor edit - two different spellings of Yazmina (or Yasmina) were used - amended so they are consistent)
 * 05:22, 24 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+12)‎ . . m Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Filicide motivation ‎ (Minor edit - corrected a few typos and grammatical errors)
 * 07:16, 24 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-2)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Leaving violent relationship motivation for women (minor edit - corrected typos)
 * 10:49, 25 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+23)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/High-risk business motivation ‎ (minor edit - amended so that references are hanging)
 * 10:58, 25 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+10)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/High-risk business motivation ‎ (Amended self-determination theory and extrinsic motivation links codes so that they work. Amended second last sentence as did not make sense.)
 * 11:35, 25 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (-28)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Consumer motivation ‎ (Substantial number of edits to spelling, grammar and syntax, and spacing as section did not make sense.)
 * 11:44, 25 October 2015 (diff | hist) . . (+51)‎ . . Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Anxiety and school refusal ‎ (minor edits - corrected a couple of typos and added links to other wiki pages for operant conditioning and Hull's theory)

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