User:TristanMM

University of Canberra - Studying Graduate Diploma in Psychological Science. Bachelor of Computer Science.

My Article: Betrayal Motivation

Email: u3120530@uni.canberra.edu.au

Social Contributions

 * 1) Before semester: Watching the moodle #emot16. It doesn't really count :(. But apparently Oxytocin is released and trust increases during social media use (see TED Talk), that's motivation! My motivation was increased, as was Kate R's from my 'Like' (@LOLROFLCOPTER)
 * 2) 16 October 2016, 20:44 Twitter post: My topic of Betrayal motivation was drafted. Provided a funny picture of a cat, for people interested. Likely not too many.
 * 3) 17 October 2016, 20:44 Moodle contribution: Uploaded a copy of my EndNote Output Style, to output references in Wikipedia format.
 * 4) 18 October 2016, 17:55 Narco-Terrorism Motivation: Provided significant feedback regarding the current focus of the article, highlighting the assessment criteria and article contents. Provided suggestions and threads to follow up.
 * 5) 18 October 2016, 19:30 Stress Recovery Theory: Direct edit, updated the introduction of the article to provide a clearer introduction to the context, rather than a clinical definition of stress recovery theory. Provided a link to feedback on Moodle.
 * 6) 18 October 2016, 20:16 Religious Radicalisation Motivation: Provided significant feedback regarding the current focus of the article. Highlighted the assessment criteria and provided some avenues which might be more relevant to motivation. Provided a link to feedback on Moodle too.
 * 7) 18 October 2016, 20:23 Chronic illness self-management motivation: Updated references section so it displays correctly.
 * 8) 19 October 2016, 20:21 Bullying and Social Needs: Directly edited the introduction to better articulate why bullying was important and the link with social needs theory. Noted the theory adopted was individual Social Needs; however, there are group social needs which could be factors (peer-pressure) along with social justice. So while those theories aren't necessarily important to the present article, they should either be highlighted or the rationale for exploring Social Needs better articulated. Notified feedback on Moodle too.
 * 9) 19 October 2016, 20:50 Provided timely advice to someone trying querying if it was ok to upload their own works.
 * 10) 20 October 2016, 19:11 Regrets Chapter: Provided significant feedback regarding the article. Highlighted some style points, identified points to expand on and research which could be used, among other things. Provided a link to feedback on Moodle too.
 * 11) 21 October 2016, 20:34 Mental illness and treatment motivation chapter: Provided significant feedback regarding the article. I suggested the content of the article was good, but it structurally it could discuss more of a link between different treatment motivations in the context of the mental illness being considered--each illness has differing treatment motivations. Link to feedback on Moodle too.
 * 12) 22 October 2016, 07:50 Provided timely input into a referencing question on Moodle.
 * 13) 22 October 2016, 12:56 Provide timely input into query regarding word count on Moodle.
 * 14) 22 October 2016, 13:01 Provided input into query regarding writing style (writing is good, provided a tip to ease concern and link off to Wikipedia articles) on Moodle.
 * 15) 23 October 2016, 14:23 Cortical activation patterns and emotion chapter. Responded to a request to proof read and provide input. See Moodle.
 * 16) 23 October 2016, 14:51 Terror Chapter: Provided feedback on Moodle in response to a request around the general premise of the chapter. The chapter looked good and I pointed out a few minor things to consider. See Moodle.