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This page was created for the purpose of addressing an assessment in the 3rd year Psychology unit, called Motivation & Emotion, at the University of Canberra, Australia.

Here is the link to the Book Chapter: Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Rape motivation#Overview

-Adiba Alam

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1. Revision as of 02:21, 16 October 2015 by U3059210 (discuss | contribs) (→‎What is plastic surgery?: corrected typing and spelling errors - spelling of 'scar')

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2. Suggested the author of chapter "Internet addiction motivation:What motivates internet addiction?" that it would help to integrate theory with the applications. http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=365885#p917901

3. Suggested author of book chapter "Grief & Health" to make some changes regarding photos, captioning, and removing a certain heading-U3059210 (discuss • contribs) 17:15, 22 October 2015 (UTC) https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Grief_and_health#Feedback

4. Suggested author of book chapter "Emotion duration" to shorten headings; provided a couple starter references; suggested to show reader why the topic is important - U3059210 (discuss • contribs) 17:39, 22 October 2015 (UTC) https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Emotion_duration#Feedback Talk on Moodle with authorː http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=364069#p917906

5. Substantial edits made on "Family influences on academic behaviour" regarding referencing, overall brevity, grammar (tense, spelling, sentence structure): https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Motivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FFamily_influences_on_academic_motivation&type=revision&diff=1458506&oldid=1457075

Made several comments on individual sentences regarding concept clarity; asked author to critically assess a few sections, mentioned these in details:U3059210 (discuss • contribs) 20:28, 22 October 2015 (UTC)

Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Family influences on academic motivation

Also discussed this with the chapter author on her thread on Moodle: http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=361202#p917916

6. Minor changes regarding addition of commas, use of semi-colons, minor sentence structure edits, and addition of certain adverbs were made on chapter "Schizophrenia and Motivation" : https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=User%3AU3079526&type=revision&diff=1458839&oldid=1446207

Comments and additional suggestions were made on author's discussion page: https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Talk:Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Schizophrenia_and_motivation#Comments

Discussed with author on Moodle: http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=367152#p917955

7. Made wiki-edits on book chapter "Reading motivation in young learners" : https://en.wikiversity.org/w/index.php?title=Motivation_and_emotion%2FBook%2F2015%2FReading_motivation_in_young_learners&type=revision&diff=1458944&oldid=1458112

Discussed the chapter with the author on Moodle and made additional comments: http://learnonline.canberra.edu.au/mod/forum/discuss.php?d=370219#p917991

8. Author emailed for feedback on chapter "Selective mutism and emotional well-being". Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Selective mutism and emotional well-being

Suggested wording change in headings, provided a potential resource to use, made some suggestions regarding content and moving diagnostic criteria of SM to the paragraph where author discusses the condition instead of discussing it in the end of the chapter. Talk:Motivation and emotion/Book/2015/Selective mutism and emotional well-being U3059210 (discuss • contribs) 23:28, 23 October 2015 (UTC)

9. Made some general proofreading corrections on book chapter "Self esteem and happiness" such as changing sentence structure and correcting spelling, removing contractions Also left comments on author's talk page and posted on author's Moodle thread.

10. Suggested author of chapter "Eustress - What is it, how does it work, and how can we use it?" to make some minor edits on adding boxes, external hyperlinks, and change a sentence structure on Moodle discussion forum.