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 * Shared title link on moodle
 * Suggested making gray table coloured to add more colour. Also suggested removing case study from overview.
 * Shared experience of Google image uploading to Wikicommons, suggested people double check they have all details of images as mine was deleted.
 * Suggested making discussion of theory more clear by adding it as separate subheading.
 * Suggested making conclusion more clear and concise to link content together.
 * Suggested editing of references, wording and adding conclusion.
 * Suggested adding one or two references to overview and changing a improper word.
 * Suggested a few wording correction, adding references and typo corrections
 * Suggested adding URL links to the "see also" section, changing some wording and adding references in a few places.
 * Email conversation as students moodle was broken, cannot provide link. Suggested breaking up one heading:

Sat 10/24/2015 2:00 PM

Hey Rhiannon!

Thanks for that! :) To:

Sat 10/24/2015 12:18 PM

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Hi Kaisha,

Outline looks great so far.

To break up "selective mutism" You could make "children and mutism" its own section with one subsection "genetics".

I do not know anything about mutism though so if children and mutism is necessary under selective mutism totally leave it!

email me when you add more content and I will have another look.. Good luck :)

Rhiannon

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Fri 10/23/2015 9:04 PM

Hey Rhiannon :)

My moodle is having issues which service desk is in the process of resolving, but i cant post on the forum. I would really appreciate some feedback on my chapter though. I havent added much except the planas i'm writing up in word and copying over later.

https://en.wikiversity.org/wiki/Motivation_and_emotion/Book/2015/Selective_mutism_and_emotional_well-being#quiz0

Thanks :)

Kaisha