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Social Contributions:
Running and depression
 * Alteration to small paragraphs to make them a slightly bigger one
 * Small grammatical changes to keep the tense the same

Activism motivation
 * Changes to sentence structure in overview - sentences were too long
 * Slight change to introductory sentence of motivational theories section.
 * It is suggested that more information to introduce this section motivational theories section is needed to tie the information with what has just been stated

Bullying and Pack Behaviour
 * Major changes made to the structure of the overview
 * Choice of words in the overview have also been changed to promote the book chapter and make it flow better better.

Transtheoretical Model of Change and Motivation
 * Combining two headings under one to create a stronger introduction
 * Made some changes to sentence structure in the introduction - however still have confusion over what is being said.
 * Small format change to document

Anxiety and weight
 * Small changes made to reduce the size of paragraphs.

Depression in Older Adults
 * Combined a couple of paragraphs to help the flow of sections what is depression? and risk factors
 * It is suggested to alter paragraphs in "related theories" section to make the chapter flow better

Love and Lust
 * Gramatical changes made to the introduction the theories section.
 * Changes made to sentences in the introduction to simplify its explanation for an easier read.